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Look Before You Sleep Rewritten (MLP Vore)

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Look Before You Sleep Rewritten (Vore)

There was a great gale blowing in Ponyville, and a few ponies were helping to get forest areas cleaned up. There were pegasi in the air placing the clouds in place in order for the upcoming storm to wreak its havoc.  Rainbow Dash was among them, and the sky blue Pegasus was in charge of the operation. She was telling Cloud Chaser which stormcloud to move, and shouting to Lightning Bolt that she needed to move out of the way.
As the flying ponies shot through the sky, arranging the clouds just so, beneath their feet, ponies down in Ponyville were also getting ready for the storm. An ivory unicorn with a beautiful purple mane was fixing a branch onto a tree, doing her part to help out. Rarity, the aforementioned white unicorn, still wasn’t happy with how it looked. She took a second to think, then perfected the branch by trimming the leaves took look like ponies. She admired her handiwork, saying ‘Perfect’ quietly to herself.
To her surprise, and anger, as soon as she’d the one this, the branch was immediately yanked down from the tree by a rope, making her take a step back in shock.
It was Applejack, bringing the branch down with a swift lasso. She spat out her rope, then gave Rarity an angered glare.
“Just leave the broken ones down, Rarity,” she said in her smooth southern accent. “Don’t y’all care about nothin’ other than prettifying?”
“Somepony  has to,” Rarity retorted indignantly. “You’re making an absolute mess of the town square, Applejack,” she continued, looking disconcertedly at the broken branches and leaves covering the ground.
“Yeah well the storm’s gonna make an even bigger mess if we don’t prune all these loose branches so that they don’t tumble down on anypony,” Applejack argued, convincingly at that.
“I simply cannot imagine why the Pegasus ponies would schedule a dreadful downpour this evening, and ruin what could’ve been a glorious sunny day,” Rarity said, disappointed with the horrid weather. “Think more practical-like, will ya?” Applejack said. “They accidentally missed a scheduled sprinkle last week, and they need a doozie of a downpour to make up for it is all.”
As soon as the last word had left Applejack’s mouth, the pegasi finished their work and the rain began to fall. The two grounded ponies felt the heavy drops of water on their bodies and noticed immediately. Of course, Rarity was first to react.
“Oh no, my wonderfully styled mane shall be ruined!” she cried, aghast at the very thought.
“You shoulda hurried up and finished the job already,” Applejack sighed, rolling her eyes a little.
Rarity began to make sounds of horror as the rain beat down on her mane, trying to find shelter.
“Oh, ah, it’s coming down to fast!” she wailed.  “Oh, ooh, ah, help me!”
Applejack was exasperated, and slightly irritated, but she was friends with the unicorn nonetheless, so she began to look for some kind of shelter. “Uh… there!” Applejack said loudly, over the heavy rain. “Hunker down to yer heart’s content while I finish things.”
Rarity’s hooves made much noise as the beat the ground, the unicorn sprinting towards the wooden table Applejack had pointed at. It wasn’t much, but it’d have to do for now.  Or at least she thought…
Rarity stopped in her tracks just before the table. She noticed the thick mud underneath it, and couldn’t bear the thought of crouching on that. “Ooh, no, no, no, no!” she hissed.
“What now?” Applejack moaned, walking back towards Rarity. After a short silence, Rarity whispered, “…I prefer not to get my hooves muddy.”
“Gah! There is just NO pleasin’ ya, is there?” spat Applejack, letting her contempt get the better of her. “Everythin’s gotta be just so.”
“Well, how does muddying my hooves serve any useful purpose?” asked Rarity, also quite annoyed by now. Intensity rose between the two as they began to realise each other’s flaws.
“Ya’ll wouldn’t know useful if it came up and bit ya!” Applejack said.
Rarity gave a small giggle, but she wasn’t happy. “That doesn’t even  make any sense,” she sniffed.
“Does so!” claimed Applejack, and the two argued back and forth like little girls. Their immature actions were a result of their opposite personalities, and they fought for quite a few minutes, each word getting them angrier with the other.
“Does so infinity!” Applejack shouted. “Hah!”
“Does not infinity plus one,” Rarity rebutted.
Tension rose as the pair stared into one another’s eyes, constantly getting crosser with one another.
A little part of Rarity recognised that this wasn’t going to end well, so she said, “What’s say we go our separate ways before one of us says something she’ll regret?”
“I reckon y’all are gonna say something y’all regret first!” Applejack cried, with no intention to end the fight without winning it.
“On the contrary, I believe it will most certainly be you who says something you will regret first.”
“I’m not sayin’ anythin’.”
“Nor am I!”
“Y’all just be on yer way then!”
“After you!”
Not taking their eyes from each other, the two slowly backed away, moving through the heavy rain and back to their homes, each going opposite directions.
Suddenly, an ear-splittingly loud burst of lightning struck, terrifying the two poor ponies. They ran to one another and huddled together, united by their fears.
“P-perhaps we should stay together for now and, um, find some shelter,” Rarity mumbled.
“Uh huh,” Applejack agreed. “Perhaps we should… and fast!”
These last words were sparked by the noisy gale moving around the girls, throwing leaves and sticks in their direction, not to mention the torrential rain.

Applejack could be found hiding underneath the aforementioned wooden table. A smile was finally on her face. “Ah, nice and dry down here. Well.. sorta,” she said, looking at the mud all over her hooves despondently.
“Hum! Unacceptable,” said the nearby Rarity, talking of the disgusting mud.
Quickly, the two’s eyes widened as they heard their names being called. To their surprise, as they recognised the voice they realised that it was their dear friend Twilight Sparkle.
The two ponies, tails and manes blowing in the wind, turned to see the purple unicorn standing on her own doorstep, shouting the pair’s names for a second time.
“Twilight?” the ponies questioned in unison, mildly startled.
“Come inside girls, quick!” cried hospitable Twilight, beckoning them with her hoof.
The two sprinted towards Twilight Sparkle’s house, the rain hitting their faces hard. Abruptly, Applejack stopped in her tracks, just outside of the house, as Rarity ran inside.
“Whoa nelly,” she said. “Is inside a tree the best place to be durin’ a lightnin’ storm?” she asked intelligently, referencing how Twilight’s house was built in a tree.
“It is if you have a magical lightning rod protecting your house like I do,” Twilight smiled. “Come on in!”
Rarity was very pleased. “We are most grateful for your invitation,” she said politely.
“Thank you kindly for yer hospitality,” agreed Applejack, stepping inside Twilight’s house – only to be stopped by Rarity, who pointed to her muddy hooves. “Oh, do be a polite house guest and go wash up, will you?” Rarity grinned, walking off. Applejack could only think of what she’d do when she got her hands on Rarity. She growled. “If I have to spend one more second with that fusspot Rarity I can’t be held responsible for what I might do!”
“Some storm, huh? The pegasus ponies sure have outdone themselves this time,” Twilight Sparkle said. “I hope you and Applejack don’t have any trouble getting home!”
“Um, it might indeed be a problem,” Rarity said, somewhat sheepishly.
“Well, you’re welcome to stay if need be,” Twilight said. “Spike is away in Canterlot on royal business. I’m home all alone tonight!” Then, an idea reached the unicorn, causing her to gasp. “You and Applejack should totally sleep over! We could have a slumber party!” she said, clapping her hooves in excitement. “I’ve always wanted one of those!”
Rarity blinked a second, horrified at the idea of spending a whole night with Applejack. Still, she had nowhere else to go and she could not reject Twilight’s kindness. Yet,  Rarity still couldn’t bear it.
“Oh, oh goodness, uh, I do believe I have another engagement scheduled for this evening that completely slipped my mind until just now, ha! Ooh, silly me, I can’t possibly stay here all night… with Applejack.” she lied, whispering the last part.
At that, Twilight Sparkle used her unicorn magic to bring a book down form her shelf and opened it in front of Rarity.
“Slumber 101 – All you’ve ever wanted to know about slumber parties but been afraid to ask…”
“It’s my own personal copy!” Twilight grinned. “It’s a fantastic reference guide. You should see the table of contents! I’ve been waiting to use it, and today’s the day! This is going to be so great!”
“Yes, uh, great….” Rarity said, with an uneasy laugh.
Meanwhile, Applejack had finished washing up and was outside, thinking of a suitable punishment for that prissy Rarity. “Hpmh,” she grumbled to herself. “I don’t know what I’ll do. Perhaps I’ll -,”
Applejack was interrupted by her own stomach grumbling. She must have been hungry. She dismissed it, but it didn’t quite slip her mind as she thought of what she’d do to Rarity…

Applejack walked slowly into the room, her hooves squeaky clean. She smiled at what  a good job she’d done, but immediately gasped as she saw what Rarity and Twilight Sparkle were up to.
“What in tarnation!?” she yelled.
Rarity was dipping her hooves in facial cream and masking Twilight with it, having already done this to herself.
“Now wait just a consarn minute,” Applejack said. “You make me wash all the mud off my hooves, but it’s okay for y’all to have mud all over yer faces?”
“Silly!” Rarity said softly. “This is called a mud mask, it’s to refresh and rejuvenate your complexion!”
Applejack grimaced at how much Rarity was getting on her nerves. What she was going to DO to that unicorn…
“We’re giving each other makeovers!” Twilight cried, with a giggle of glee. “We have to do it. It says so in the book.”
Applejack read the book’s title, and her first thought was exactly that of Rarity’s. “Oh hay, would ya look at the time… I gotta skedaddle on home, I’m mightly late for, er, somthin’… g’night!”
Applejack ran for the door, but was petrified by the lightning outside and rejoined the girls. “Or… maybe I’ll sit here for a spell,” she said.
“Hooray, slumber partyyyy!” cried Twilight enthusiastically.
Rarity immediately began to makeover Applejack, much to the orange pony’s disgust. She placed cucumber slices over Applejack’s eyes, confusing poor AJ.
“What in the world is this for?” she asked.
“To reduce the puffiness around one’s eyes, of course,” Rarity sighed, with a roll of her eyes, much to Applejack’s unmasked irritation.
“Puffiness shmuffiness!” Applejack cried, eating the cucumbers with one fell swoop. Sadly, it didn’t come close to quenching her hunger. Still, “That’s good eatin’!” she exclaimed.
Rarity gave an annoyed glare to Applejack, who was now only hungrier. She looked at Rarity too and instinct began to take over.
“Hee hee! Isn’t this exciting? We’ll do everything by the book, and that will make my slumber party officially fun!” Twilight Sparkle said, momentarily breaking the growing tension.
“Did you hear that, Applejack?” Rarity spat. “YOU certainly wouldn’t want to do anything to ruin Twilight’s first slumber party, would you?”
She was teasing Applejack with that last line, and the southern pony knew it. “Of course not,” Applejack said, “and you wouldn’t either.”
“So do we have an agreement?” Rarity said.
“You betcha,” grinned Applejack, planning just how everything would go in her head.
She spat on her hoof to shake with Rarity, and there came a sickened reaction from the ivory
unicorn. “You know, there’s gross, and then there’s just plain rude,” she sniffed.
Applejack wanted to get Rarity right away, but she managed to calm herself slightly. “You know, there’s fussy, and there’s just plain gettin’ on mah nerves!”
“Fortunately, I can get along with anypony, no matter how difficult she may be.” Rarity said haughtily.
“Oh YEAH? Well I’m the get-alongiest pony you’ll ever meet!” Applejack cried, completely unable to calm herself now.
“That’s not even a word.” Rarity said simply.
The tension levels were up there again, nothing but hatred as the two stared into each other’s flaming eyes. Just as Applejack was about to reply, Twilight Sparkle butted in, hugging the two ponies to herself and shouting “This is the best slumber party ever, yay!”
“Yay,” the two other ponies chorused unenthusiastically.

How am I gonna get Twilight outta the way? Applejack thought to herself, trying to figure out a way to make her plan work. She was watching Rarity and Twilight have their manes curled… and having the unfortunate experience of having hers curled too.
“Soooo, how are you getting along over there, Applejack?” Rarity teased, really getting to Applejack’s nerves now… on purpose.
“Just fine, Rarity…” Applejack growled.
“This is so awesome!” Twilight cried with a laugh. She had no idea that she was the only thing stopping the two from battling to the death. “Makeovers: check!”
Applejack was starving. Hmm, perhaps I can make that play into the way I punish Rarity…
“Ooh, it says here we get to tell ghost stories,” Twilight grinned.  “Who gets to go first?”
“Me!!!” roared Applejack. “I’d like to tell y’all the terrifying tale of the prissy ghost who drove everypony crazy with their unnecessary neatness! Woooo!” Applejack cried, making ghost noises.
“I’m sure y’all are familiar with that one,”
Rarity knew this was targeted at her, and decided to challenge the insult. “Never heard of it. But I have a much better one! It’s the horrifying story of the messy inconsiderate ghost how irritated everypony within a hundred miles! Owwooooo!”
“That’s not a real story. You made it up!” claimed Applejack.
“It is a ghost story. They’re all made up.” Rarity sniffed.
Applejack was madly irritated at this point. She’d chosen her trick, and was ready to spring, but suddenly the lights went out.
The girls could see again as Twilight Sparkle turned a torch on, and placed it underneath her face. “I’ve got one.”
“This story’s called the Legend of the Headless Horse.”
Lightning struck outside, and Applejack and Rarity were both visibly frightened, cowering next to Twilight.
“It was a stormy night, just like this one, and three ponies were having a slumber party, just… like… this one…”
“…and just when the last pony thought she was safe, there, standing right behind her, inches away, was….. THE HEADLESS HORSE!”
The lights went out again, and in a matter of seconds they were back on. Applejack and Rarity looked up to see… the headless horse!
They huddled together and screamed, horrified. The beast waved its arms angrily. Applejack and Rarity’s minds raced, thinking of hat it would do to them… when suddenly, it took the sheet (that was where its head should have been) off, exposing… Twilight’s face!
The purple unicorn ran to turn the lights back on, then ran back over to Slumber 101, and said, “Ghost story: check!”
Applejack and Rarity realised they were still embracing one another, and quickly broke apart. Each gave a little glare at the other, and Twilight broke the ice again by crying, “Now, who wants smores?”

Applejack sat happily enough by the fire, roasting three marshmallows to make a smore with. Behind her, Rarity was showing Twilight her way of preparing said delicacy.
“…Then you place one marshmallow on the top of the chocolate, and be sure it’s centred (that’s critical) and then carefully put another square graham cracker on the top. And… done! Tada!”
“Ooh!” said Twilight, interested.
Applejack hadn’t forgotten how hungry she was. The smore did look appetising, so she said, “Nah, ya just eat ‘em.” She grabbed the treat between her teeth and began to chew happily with her mouth open. It tasted wonderful. Rarity looked revolted at Applejack’s display, and for the icing on the cake, Applejack gave a small belch once she’d devoured the food.
“Hum! You could at least say excuse me,” she spat haughtily.
“I was just about to, but you interrupted me!” she cried. “…Pardon.”
Applejack sat and looked proud, while Rarity gave her eyes a roll. Sadly for the orange pony, she’d just been made hungrier. She would really need something big to eat, and she knew just what.
The poor orange pony didn’t know, however, that she was about to be subjected to even more of Rarity’s vindictive bullying.
“Smores: check!” said Twilight happily, crossing out another thing in her book. “Now the next item of fun we have to do is… Truth or dare!”
The hungry Applejack stared as Rarity said, “I dare Applejack to do something carefully an neatly, for a change.”
Fighting back, Applejack said, “Oh yeah? Well I dare Rarity to lighten up, an’ stop obsessin’ over every last little detail! … for a change.
“I think the truth of the matter is that somepony could stand to pay a little more attention to detail,”
“And I think the truth is somepony oughta quit with her fussin’, so the rest of us can get things done!”
Twilight watched in horror as the tension rose again, the two ponies full of nothing but hate and spite. They stared into each other’s eyes, grimacing at the thoughts of one another, and Twilight knew she had to stop them… and soon.
“Umm… I don’t think this is how the game’s supposed to work,” she said. “You have to give an honest answer to any question, or do whatever anypony dares you to do.”
Applejack knew that a meal always looked better and more appetising when it was wet. She had come up with a plan, and decided this would help things, if not hunger her more.
“I dares you, to step outside, and let yer precious tidy mane get ruined again!” she yelled.
Rarity gasped in fear. Ruin her beautiful, curled mane? No way on earth would she do such a thing!
“You have to, it’s the rule,” said Twilight.
“Hah!” cried Applejack, victorious and happy about it.
“Fine!” Rarity spat, pacing slowly towards the door. She was not at all happy about having to do this. Applejack watched happily as Rarity made her way outside. She licked her lips as her plan came together. She snickered as Rarity made little sounds of terror once outside.
Rarity stepped back inside, her mane soaking wet and dripping water all over Twilight’s floor, with the same going for her tail. She looked upset about this, and stood there shivering as Applejack laughed out of victory and just how funny Rarity looked.
“Okay, I dare Applejack to play dress-up, in a froufrou glittery, lacy outfit!”  Rarity cried spitefully, crushing poor Applejack’s moment of pleasure.
It was Applejack’s turn to gasp in horror. She gave Rarity a livid glare of contempt as she went and threw on an outfit. It was made of blue silk and had white and pink lace on the rim. It also had a blue silk hat and matching blue pearl earrings, with blue and pink flowers in Applejack’s hair. She wore pink bows around her front hooves a white pearl necklace, with massive puffy sleeves that also had white lace.
“Happy?” she said.
“Very,” Rarity smiled cruelly. Oh, what Applejack would do to have Twilight out of the way so her plan could work…
“Um… do I ever get a turn?” asked Twilight. It just seemed like more bickering to her.
“I dare ya to enter the next rodeo when it comes to town!” Applejack shouted.
“I dare you not to enter the next rodeo that comes to town!” Rarity shouted back.
“I dare ya to not comb yer mane a hundred times before bed!” Applejack cried.
“And I dare you to comb yours just once!” Rarity cried.
The two ponies were again full of anger. They stared at the other, each thinking of how much she hated that cruel, stupid pony.
“Uh, I think we should check off truth or dare and move on. Let’s see what our next fun fun fun thing is, shall we?” Twilight said, worried the two ponies would begin to brawl.
But as she checked Slumber 101, she was unsure of what the next activity was. A look of pure confusion on her face, she said, “Hmm, what does this mean? Pillow fight?”
“Oh please,” Rarity said indignantly. “I am not at all interested in participating in something so crude.”
Applejack was madly irritated by this. Rarity was above fun? What was wrong with this pony?! She took advantage of the situation and threw a soft, white pillow at Rarity’s face.
Little did Applejack know that this would unleash mean Rarity’s competitive streak. “It – is – on!” Rarity growled, ready to give the fight with Applejack her all.
The nasty ivory unicorn lobbed a pillow at Applejack’s face, hitting the poor pony. She’d suffered a whole night of Rarity’s bullying, and now this? Unacceptable! She knew how to fight back.
She wanted to give Rarity her ‘punishment’ right now, but she knew better than to with Twilight around. Instead, she kicked three pillows at Rarity, all of them hitting her in the face. Rarity tried to retaliate, but Applejack dodged all the pillows thrown in her direction. In fact, she grabbed them all and lassoed them back at Rarity, who unfortunately used her unfair advantage (unicorn magic) to stop them from hitting her.
Applejack was so cross with this prissy, dumb, obsessive pony. Why couldn’t she enjoy anything that involved getting a speck of dirt on her hoof? She just wanted to get Rarity, and discarded all parts of her that thought she should give Rarity another chance. By now, she was full of hate, and nothing more.
The two fought more and more, getting angrier and angrier. Twilight saw the pure hate in Applejack’s eyes, and the pure spite in Rarity’s, so she decided to try and break the two up. “Uh, girls, don’t you think we should take it down a notch?” she asked.
“I will if she will!” exclaimed the furious Applejack.
“She started it!” shouted Rarity pettily.
“Maybe we should just call it a night and get some sleep…” Twilight sighed exasperatedly.

Twilight was sleeping soundly, a smile on her face as she gave small snores. Applejack and Rarity had to share a bed, as Twilight only had one. Of course, neither was at all happy about this.
“Keep your muddy hooves on your side of the bed!” Rarity whispered.
“My hooves ain’t muddy!” Applejack whispered. Why was Rarity being so horrid?
“They were, there might still be a little on them,” hissed Rarity.
“There ain’t, see?” whispered Applejack, holding a clean hoof up to Rarity’s spiteful face.
“Ew!” Rarity breathed, and with one swift motion, she grabbed the whole cover and placed it over herself, leaving Applejack in the cold.
That was the last straw for Applejack. She was tired of suffering from Rarity’s cruel glares, nasty comments, mean actions and selfish ideas.
That was when she realised that right now, she would be able to carry out her plan without a hitch. Twilight was fast asleep, and Applejack was still starved. Now was the perfect moment.
Applejack yanked the cover off, waking Rarity, who’d fallen asleep at this point. She stood up, throwing the cover to the floor.
“Applejack?” murmured Rarity sleepily.
Applejack grinned devilishly. She picked Rarity up by her back legs, fully waking the unicorn now.
She knew exactly what she had to do. She licked Rarity’s hooves, giving them a taste first. They were wonderful.
“What are you DOING?!” hissed Rarity.
“It’s called revenge,” smirked Applejack. She stuffed all of Rarity’s left back hoof into her mouth, wrapping her tongue around it and tasting its divine flavour.
Rarity tried to let out a scream, but nothing happened. She was too shocked by what was going on.
“Delicious,” Applejack said, through a mouth of hoof. She took it out of her mouth, licking her lips at just how tasty it was. She decided it’d be better to eat Rarity a different way.
She ran behind the bed, and picked up the pony’s face by her cheeks. Rarity watched in awe as Applejack opened her mouth as wide as she could, which was actually rather wide. She gave Rarity’s ear a playful lick before stuffing Rarity’s whole head into her mouth. She managed to get Rarity’s face into her mouth, licking the delicious purple mane with her tongue.
“APPLEJACK!” Rarity shouted, but it was muffled, therefore not waking Twilight. Applejack used her strong hooves to push Rarity’s shoulders into her mouth, shoving most of Rarity’s head down her gullet. It felt great. Applejack savoured Rarity’s taste as the unicorn kicked and struggled. Applejack knew she didn’t have quite a full grip on Rarity yet, and that it was still possible for the unicorn to escape her fate.
Applejack pushed Rarity’s shoulders further into her mouth, forcing Rarity’s head into Applejack’s stomach. Rarity shouted something, but it was inaudible due her being inside Applejack.
Applejack licked Rarity’s shoulders, feeling them in her throat and enjoying their wonderful taste. She gave a tiny hiccup, making Rarity feel strange, and struggle more. Applejack had gravity on her side, and threw back her head to gulp down Rarity’s torso. Applejack lavished the taste of Rarity’s prim flat stomach, pressing it against the roof of her mouth to speed up the process of swallowing it. She now only had Rarity’s back legs, plot and tail sticking from her mouth. She stuffed them in to find they taste even better than the front legs. The majority of Rarity was now inside Applejack’s expanding stomach, where the unicorn kicked and struggled. Applejack puckered her lips and sucked as though she was eating spaghetti, and Rarity’s tail disappeared down Applejack’s gullet. She had had to balloon her throat to swallow the unicorn, but with a rather swift motion, Applejack, making a loud gulping noise, swallowed Rarity.
Applejack looked down at her gurgling, bloated stomach. It was humongous, making strange noises as it struggled to digest Rarity. It jiggled as Applejack tried to move, almost grounding her. It sloshed and the unicorn inside kicked its walls desperately.
Applejack moaned in pleasure as she felt her heavy, excessive gut. She stroked it with her hooves, only to feel Rarity squirm inside.
“Uuuuuuuuaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrp!” Applejack belched, covering her mouth as not to let too much air escape. She wanted Rarity to breath. “Woo-nelly! Did yer hear that, Rarity?!” she grinned.
“UGH! You’re so disgusting Applejack! Let me out of here this instant!” came the voice from inside Applejack’s bloated orange gut.
“Well now yer in there, I can be as disgustin’ as I want! UARP!” Applejack said, with a small burp. “Agh! Applejack! This is horrible!” cried Rarity, kicking and squirming. Applejack licked her lips, savouring the taste of Rarity before she began to digest. Rarity never gave up in her struggling, but Applejack simply laid against the wall and relaxed, feeling her hanging, round, heavy gut.
She began to doze off, despite Rarity’s incessant kicking. “Rarity, you’re not gonna get outta there. Yer just speedin’ up the – hic! – digestion…” Applejack hiccupped. However, she was secretly enjoying Rarity’s struggling. She moaned in pleasure, knowing she’d never feel as good as she felt now. “Oooooohhh,” she moaned. “This was a great idea…”
Rarity was beginning to slow down.  Applejack hiccupped loudly, and that did it. Twilight had been stirring before, unknown to Applejack, but now, Twilight woke up.
“Uhh? Applejack…? Rarity?” Twilight said as her vision came into focus. She fully entered the world, only to see Applejack at twice her normal size.
“Applejack? Home come you’re so big?” she asked, confusedly. “You can’t put on that much weight from simply eating food.”
Applejack was the element of honesty, but she knew she couldn’t tell Twilight that she’d eaten Rarity, who was digesting in Applejack’s massive tummy as they spoke. Rarity kicked at the stomach walls, making Applejack moan a little.
“Did you hear me? How did you get so big?”
“Um… I don’t know…” Applejack lied.
Twilight’s eyes swivelled to the bed. “Huh?” she asked. “Where’s Rarity?”
“Uuaarp!” belched Applejack, unfortunately for her. Rarity squirmed slowly in Applejack’s humongous round stomach, struggling as she was digested.
“Applejack, you haven’t answered either of my questions.” Twilight frowned.
Applejack’s guilty conscience was beginning to get the better of her. She knew she had to tell Twilight; this wasn’t the kind of secret you could go without telling. As she was about to open her mouth to say something, she realised that she was still hungry.
And that she hadn’t had dessert.
“Twilight?” she asked softly, in her pretty southern accent.
“Yes Applejack?” asked Twilight.
“I can show you where Rarity went.”
“Oh, do please.”
“Sure!”
The ravenous pony grabbed Twilight Sparkle by the hooves, and, thrusting her head back, Applejack threw Twilight into the air. The purple unicorn landed feet first in Applejack’s mouth, and got pushed down immediately by Applejack, forcing her feet down AJ’s gullet.  
“Applejack, what are you trying to do?!” Twilight cried.
“Showin’ ya where Rarity went!” Applejack shouted devilishly.
Applejack forced Twilight down her gullet, struggling with the size of the pony.  She licked Twilight’s back, lavishing it with her tongue and tasting its delicate, delicious flavour. She gulped Twilight down, making loud swallowing noises. She eventually managed to get all of Twilight down, pushing the whole unicorn into her gullet.
Now, with two unicorns in her stomach, Applejack stared exhaustedly at her huge, round gut. It was impossible for Applejack to stand up by now, and Rarity was now half digested, but the orange pony was still enormous. She felt her rotund belly, feeling the squirming ponies inside. She let out a moan of pleasure, enjoying the lasting taste of her delicious meal. Her bloated, heavy stomach was now of epic proportions. She listened to the sounds of digestion it made, sloshing and gurgling as the two ponies inside it kicked and struggled.
“Ahhhh… I’m glad I only slept over with two girls. I’m stuffed!” Applejack smiled.
“Applejack! You ate me!” Twilight’s voice came from Applejack’s huge belly.
“I told ya I was gonna show ya where Rarity went!” said Applejack, with a small hiccup. “Oooahh… I feel kinda strange… I think I’m gonnaUUUUUUUUUAAAARRRRRRRRRRRPPPPPPPP!” belched Applejack, surprising herself. There came a scream from her stomach as Rarity was digested. Applejack sighed happily, feeling the ponies squirm inside her massive gut. She hiccupped again, only to find Rarity’s eyemask in her hoof. She laughed, and, listening to the gurglings of her gut, slowly began to fall asleep.
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Okay, so it took a while to get to the "vore" part of the story, but its still nicely executed, not to mention funny and unique. Despite only having 3 characters, it has nice dynamics and they stayed true to how they are, not to mention the third act is pretty shocking.